by N J Thornton Apr 18, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
Chestnut eyes skimmed a crisp page |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Mmm. you poems are truly amazing. they are so unique. |
Hmm, it's different. It's good though. Using words like skimmed, crisp, cynical, made it seem more poetry like. Even though it was only about a newspaper. I enjoyed it very much so. Good job, it flowed okay. Not the best, but was good. Keep writing. =) 5/5 |