This was a different thing for me, for I took as both Literally and metaphorically. IT was amazing both ways. It's like I've been there, and yet I want to be there. Not sure if I got my point across but yeah. great write! 5/5

-Liz-
~muahs to all~

Interesting write . I`m not a very insightful person, so I saw some of it metaphorically, some literally, and then the rest I just didn`t understand xD

As slimy-smooth rocks
lick my knees

I liked those two lines . I don`t know why , they just seemed to stick with me . The poem was pretty great either way (:
..__MiNDYY

Again this is diffrent, in a good way. Ir eally like your poems, you are talented beyond belief. Excellent write, keep up the good work, and I couldn't agree more wtih every fight ending in a sunny sigh.

Alright well, you wanted me to be honest so I am going to do that. I've read a few of your poems, and personally its not intriuging to me, because I have a very different style of writing than you do. I mean, for sure these are good poems and have wonderful meaning to them, but I'm not going to give you bull crap comments about how I love it, when its just not my style. Hope you understand!