I Can't Imagine My Life Without

by Brett   Apr 18, 2007


I cant help thinking of you day in and out
Thinking back on all the times we had
I can't imagine my life without,
Being with you makes me so glad

Thinking back on all the times we had
Never fearing anything comes between us
Being with you makes me so glad
I give you my full heart with trust

Never fearing anything comes between us
I hope we stay together forever
I give you my full heart with trust
We can defeat any great endeavor

I'll love you always i promise i will
I cant help thinking of you day in and out
Even if I'm ill
I can't imagine my life without.

I kinda slopped this together for school....
Kinda sucky Imo...Constructive criticism anyone please?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Never fearing anything comes between us
    I hope we stay together forever
    I give you my full heart with trust
    We can defeat any great endeavor"

    That was gorgeous! Who needs school anyway? lol. I bet this was a lot more productive =)
    Seriously though, a beautiful little love poem!
    5/5
    *Gem*