A vacant space...

by Neo Castelino   Apr 18, 2007


I see a million of stars tonight,
some are dim few are bright.
But there's a vacant space I see,
a space that is just enough,
enough to fit some few more stars.
I take a promise to fill it up,
the vacant space that exists out there.
And that star won't be mere,
but it's gonna be immensely bright.
Until it leaves an immortal impression.
The star that will brighten up,
brighten even the night into day.
Raise up the burdened heart that lay.
Spread miles of joy and happiness,
show you a path in your deep stress.
Fulfilling the promise it made,
will travel all around the world.
Before it extinguishes it's fire within,
putting a hope and believe.
Hold on there you tough days!!
until then you keep the space.
A space that will just be enough,
enough to fit some few more stars...

Always by,
Neo.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marjan

    A space that will just be enough,
    enough to fit some few more stars...

    Is there actually anyone not enjoying those two lines? I had my own share of enjoying them. Thank you Neo! :)