Hey tammza. well done with this excellent poem. short yet sweet. less is best. right? thats how the famous saying goes.

5/5 always. David

AWH. I really liked that, it was so sweet. The descriptions you used created a nice image in my mind and you also managed to tie in a cute kind of feel to the poem. Lovey job hun. 5/5

Heu hun, this was a great poem. I like Haiku:)

The Angel of Secrets

This was perfect, the imagery was so vivid i could picture the dark nights sky in my mind and watch a shooting star shoot straight across it. I truely loved this. It was fantastic well done~mel

Lol.
Simple.
I wish a shooting star would grant MY wish.
Lol.

Hmm...
Come to think of it.
I don't know what my wish is, yet.
Weird.