Comments : Custodies Astartes

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Bravo my friend!!
    For a poem thats so different from your normal style it is truly amazing!
    I could almost see the men that you were describing. Breath-taking!
    Well done Krzy!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Well said! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    Is it supposed to be plural as in man? or men?
    Just wondering yeh.
    so different from all of the other poems that you have done, i enjoyed reading it :) you should be happy that the change has worked well :)
    5/5 as always :)
    ~*~Jen~*~

  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    Maybe its the these that confused me after re-reading it :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Cathy

    Nice poem Krzysztof! 5/5