This is a great poem, very lyrical

Beautifully penned with excellent imagery and flow. So many emotions - happiness, sadness, a hint of humor (with the cinnamon buns) very creative. Nice job!

Wooow that was a really good poem, i really liked it! you had some good word choice in there to very magical 5/5

I really love this. Reads and flows nicely. Choice of words are great. (I did however have to mentally remove the ellipses. I think it flow much better, but I assume there is a reason for them ;) ) 5/5

Wow, this was amazing! I love all the words you chose and how you tied everything together! Great job! Please keep writing your wonderful poems! And thank you for the comment on mine, it means a lot! :]

Thats beautiful .......itz mad deep props 2 u.....so wuts good?

I know I have commented on this before but I've read it again and I'm still blown away at how AMAZING this poem is! I absolutley LOVE it! The way everything flows and the awesome imagery! Its soo awesome!
My favorite part...
"Filled me with joy, filled me with beauty...
Fulfilling my void, she made this her duty...
Gave me the night, & loaned me the stars...
Surgeon of sadness she healed all my scars.."--W.O.W... the word choice..the flow.. the meaning.. the imagery... AMAZING! ^_^
Please do keep writing! You have so much talent! Keep in touch!
Always smile :)

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