Wow, such a wonderful poem.. so sad but yet so good! Nice job and please keep up the good work! <3 5/5

This is a very good poem ciao, sends chills up my back, love the flow and choice of wording, as always this is a 5/5!!! keep making good poems!!!!

I think it's difficult to write this type of deeply negative poetry without reaching for easy chichés, but you've gone a long way towards avoiding that with both your choice of phrasing and the fact you've kept a good pace and a succinct length.

I LOVED this!
The opening was perfect, had me completely hooked, the flow was flawless throughout, imagery created vivid pictures and I could see the emotion and depth behind the words.
The ending was perfect, and although this is such a sad poem, it sure was a pleasure to read.

This reminds me of the poem my friend wrote for me awhile back, and it brought tears to my eyes just as the other did. There is one thing, you had "life" instead of "live" on that one line; I do believe that is what you meant to say haha. But anyways, I really liked this and I especially liked the end, it really wrapped it up. Your talent continues to grow with each poem, as does your vocabulary. 5.5

heartchuu.

O....M....G Ciao... OMG... That was AWESOME!! Flow and wording was AMAZING!! GAH!! It almost had me in tears!! That was an amazing piece of work, it really tells about how much abuse one person can take... awesome write, much better read 5/5 for sure!!!!!

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.