by Jez Apr 18, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
For to long have I been building this wall around me |
Very strong topic for a poem, well done. It was perfectly penned and well organized with commas at the right spots. I read your poem and I'd like to say that your poem are very strong and with more experience they could become something really good. Keep up your talent and keep on writing. |
by Gem
That was.. amazing. |