That was.. amazing.
You have some excellent talent!
So many meanings could be pulled from this piece, the wall could be a metaphor for so many things..
Brilliant piece!
5/5
*Gem*

Very strong topic for a poem, well done. It was perfectly penned and well organized with commas at the right spots. I read your poem and I'd like to say that your poem are very strong and with more experience they could become something really good. Keep up your talent and keep on writing.