by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG Apr 18, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
Your little girl, walking downtown all alone, |
K, i dont see the point in even commenting anymore. I should just read it and vote a 5. I wish i could say something more but u leave me speechless. |
Wow, another brilliant poem. I was wondering, did you get the idea from this from the novel, "The Lovely Bones" by Alice Sebold? Was just wondering, because I love that book! |
by aDORKable x3
I'm sitting here with my mouth open, speechless. I was expecting this to be about the book, but when I read this, uh, just speechless! It was beautifuly written. The imagery... the blood, the bones, the guns, the alley... everything was just amazing... But, c'mon now, I have come to expect nothing less from you. :) Keep it up babe! |
by 19Rusty
Wow good rhyming, and it was a good read, I didn't want to stop. |
by Mommy And Me
This was wonderfully written Jenna Dear. it made me want to keep on reading on. it was grand. i loved the words you played on and the way you wrote it in general.. <3 Terra |