by myshiningstar14 Apr 18, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
NEVER FALLEN |
by Weeping Wolf
Oh yess....i used to feel that way about my past love, it was just....mmm, amazing. but please be cautious, things like this, sometimes change. But on the poem, overal good, can't pick my favortie part. |
I really like the way htat you use repetition, sometimes it went on a bit but i like the meaning of the poem it worked well. good job |
And what a great feeling it is when you've fallen for someone who has fallen for you. |