Long Ago

by Marie   Apr 13, 2004


My minds an empty mess
of stuff i could care less

A mixture of you and him
So I'm stuck on the rim

Wondering whats in your brain?
Any thoughts of change

To how it use to be
Back when it was just you and me

Nothing was wrong
everything was right

Our own little world
Our minds in a whirl

Nights of each others embrace
I can still see you face

Anything done for you
but for me it was all new

How I miss the days of old
It all seems so long ago.

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  • 20 years ago

    by Tony Alexander

    Good poem, I thought that you could've been a little more expressive, but overall it was good.

  • 20 years ago

    by My Obsεssion

    Simple but good, keep it up

  • 20 years ago

    by LostInLife!

    hey great poem, you put a lot of feeling into it, thats good!!
    jemma xxx

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