Just another ordinary day

by Brie Anna   Apr 18, 2007


One day I could take no more
I ran into my bed room and locked the door
I had been unhappy for a long while
But I lied and pretended to be a happy child
I should of gone to a friend and told them how I felt
But I wasnt thinking straight for all Ive been dealt
So I gabbed my razor and slit my wrist
Cried a million tears for a person who wouldnâ??t be missed
I feel to the floor and hit my head
My body was motionless I was just about dead
No one realized I wasnt around
Till the day she came over to my house was I found
Then came the day I was to be buried it started to rain
It was like god in haven was crying for all my pain
As I was being lowered into the ground
There was only a few people to be found
For no one missed me and no one cared
For them I simply was never there
So as you can I was not in important in every way
So to everyone this was just another ordainary day

�© Brie Anna cherry jello press 2007 �©

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Wow what a sad poem. I understand exactly how you feel i use 2 cut and the stopped but my brother passed away less than 2 weeks ago along with a really close friend of mine. they both overdosed and tragically he is now gone. My boyfriend who i loved broke up with me cos i didnt actually tell anyone why i was so depressed and just kept using other things as excuses but 2day a whole lot of people found out and saw all my cuts. this poem was amazing. i loved it. iit was so so well written. great joob, your words were truly haunting

  • 17 years ago

    by XxMoonLightxX

    This poem almost ripped my heart out

    i use to cut...and even though things have gotten better and i have stopped

    the poem made the scars burn
    a very deep and fromt he heart poem
    not many people can write this amazing
    but you surely have the talent

    brilliant job!

    ~Shannon~

  • 17 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    WOW. the ending just really got to me. its exactly how i feel. no one would care. i think its true too.

  • 17 years ago

    by ash

    This is deep, im loveing it... your talent is outstanding, i wish i had some talent like your for my poetry, i havent worte in a while all my poeps are from 4 years ago.. lol, but keep up the work... i love it...

  • 17 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    So much Depression for such a young person. I find it sad myself that you seem burden. I'vve been in that emotion for a little bit of the time. Well, nice write, keep up the awsome work.

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