Emotions Waterfall. [Song]

by Teria   Apr 18, 2007


The warmth of your skin,
the look you held.
The tears that fell
from within.

They're what keeps me
holdin' on.
carryin' on.
Oh, holdin' on.

The way you felt
it broke my heart.
The way you died,
it stole my soul.

Reasons unknown
yield my life.
Prevention lost,
but not our love.

It's what keeps me
holdin' on.
carryin' on..
Oh, holdin' on.

Remembrance of what we had.
Dreams cling to my life.
The ones I cannot complete,
'cause a fool stole it all.

Oh, Oh, Oh, Oh.
Emotions Waterfall.
Emotions Waterfall.

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Written for lost loved ones in the Virgina Tech Massacre.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem another 5/5 Keep up the great writting:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    This song was great. it was sad but full of emotion. the flow was good to, just like your last song.

    The way you felt
    it broke my heart.
    The way you died,
    it stole my soul.

    thats my favorite stanza in this song. the structure of it was really good. 5/5 keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Xx Eternal Fantasy xX

    This song was

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    This poem was really beautiful and I'm glad you decided to write something for the Virginia Tech shooting, a truly appalling event. I really liked the simplicity of this, because songs that have good meaning but go straigh to the point are beautiful. Something I think would be better though for a song of this serious note would be not to end words in "n'", like instead of holdin' and carryin', maybe holding and carrying? Of course that's a personal creative choice. Either way, excellent work!

    ~jas~

  • 17 years ago

    by Darkening Dawn

    Good words. Would like to see the sheet music if you ever do that

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