I thought it was okay. Like you said not your best, I like to see that some can easily write short poetry, I find it hard, I have too much to say. lol, I have a friend that does it too, you both are the only two I've ever seen be able to pull it off well. Anyhow, good job, keep it up, =) 5/5
-Ally

This is a good start. I think you could expand on this poem a bit more.
Tell me if you do and I would gladly read it
4/5

[Sarah]

I gave this one 4/5. it was a really good poem except it kind of just ended without any ending at all..you know?? but if you finished it up and had a good ending,im sure it would be a great poem!

Your poems are telling me that they are not just another fiction poetry but reality. As i have said this many times, in my opinion poetry has two kind, one of them is fiction where poets reach the sky or underearth, and the second kind is you, or i should say myself as well, who write what they feel, who write the reality. that s why your poems are greatest.
you have a very great talent.
nothing less than a perfect 5/5 cause you really deserve it.

Still a great poem none the less. great job!

O.k so it wasn't one of your best, but I still liked it. I t was at least heartfelt. I will give it a 4/5.

Yah this is not one of ur best but i think this is still nice and very appreciated work..4/8

I like it still

You said this one wasnt one of your best, but I still liked it. You could really feel the sadness and emotion within this poem.

This is a really nice poem, about a lost love. you could really feel the emotion you put into it. 5/5

Kalee

Maybe it wasnt your best but there was emotion and it flowed well, and although it was short, it worked well
well done
xxxxx