Such a loss.. every time a young girl or boy chooses to end life in such a way.. it breaks my heart..
Such a chilling read, the portrayels are spot on
5/5
*Gem*

Beautiful poem...in a very sad, tragic way. Very well written. It saddens me every time I hear of a teenager committing suicide, because I've been there and come back from that abyss. If they can realise that they've got more to live for than they can see at any one time they might decide to stay and see what life's got to offer. Back on topic though...if only that girl had been able to keep her innocence...if only.

Excellent poem, im look forward to reading more

Thank you fro your comment, I assure you I will return the favor, when I get the chance.

You are very good at this but it makes me cry to heard something like this and it hurts me. But it is good.