Summer Nights

by Kaila   Apr 18, 2007


Beautiful smiles,
hot summer days,
sitting by the pool,
waisting my life away.

Ice cold drinks,
beach balls too,
sand on my feet,
while I play with you.

Shivering moonlight,
warm blankets to cover,
hand in hand we lay,
down with each other.

Wake up late,
quick lunch to go,
run around all day,
my body's never slow.

Biking, swimming,
whatever it may be,
I get my exercise in,
by the end you will see.

Late night chats...
only with you,
I'll spend my summer,
only wanting you.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    5/5 again. Your flow is perfect in these poems.

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aww.. this is cute.. the read was really nice.. the short and choppy lines work well.. you did a nice job of getting in so much in such a small space.. the simplicity of it works well too because of the simple sweetness of a summer romance.. great job .. :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, excellent write. I enjoyed the read. I am sure many of use can relate to this. Great work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Ooo...fabulous job.
    Summer is certainly one of the most looked forward to part of the year. =) Your imagery in this one was amazing & the emotions were strong. Wonderful job! Keep writing! 5.5

    Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is sweet and i can feel the love you have for this person
    beautiful poem
    the flow is great
    another 5/5!!!
    you have a great gift for poetry, i mean it, dont stop writing!!!

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