Awesome. I like the discriptions. I could feel myself in those places such as sitting by the pool and things like that. Nice work.
~Sid~

This poem is really good. i really like it. I wish i had as much talent as you.. i cant get anything i write to flow that well.. good job!

Oh those summer nights are a pleasant thing. some people travel several miles for one. whenever i need a good summer night i'll read this poem.

your servant:
david

Waisting my life away.
SP . Wasting .

"Shivering moonlight,
warm blankets to cover,
hand in hand we lay,
down with each other."

That was definitely my favourit estanza . It was short, different, and fast-paced but good . I felt like the ending got kind of week, but despite that, it was a good write (:
..__MiNDYY

Beautiful poem. it was very well written. you are a very talented writer. the poem flowed so nicely. 5/5

~Kristina

"Shivering moonlight,
warm blankets to cover,
hand in hand we lay,
down with each other."

I think that was my favorite stanza, I loved this poem! Well written! 5/5

This was actually quite nice, because although it was the lovely dovey theme again, it was based around enjoying summer too.
The hot and summery seasonal images were simple yet effective in portraying the hot, sticky, and somewhat romantic "story."
The fact it's set in a hot time of year makes it all that more sensual because it makes you hot and sweaty...just like other intimate love activities can. Anyway, I liked this.

I liked it. It showed the energy you have for the topic, you should explore this topic more, you could get even more out of it.

"waisting my life away." (sic) ( = Wasting is misspelled in the line.)

This is a sweet, dreamy love poem. I am quite delighted to have read this piece, although it didn't reveal so much scenery to my mind's eye. You can, however, expand it more if you wish to.
My pleasure reading it nonetheless.

Sounds like a perfect summer:) I loved this poem. It has a great flow to it. 5/5

I loved this.
It was cute, and sweet.. but short.
I love when people are able to capture such emotion in short poems.

Keep it up, hun. :]
5/5

The description and story put into this is amazing, you truly do have alot of talent. I loved the poem its wonderfully written and executed. Countdown of 18 more poems to comment

<3 Austin

Hey it's a beautiful poem...very well penned.m adding u to my fav's

Aww, this is a cute and sweet poem.
Yes the summer is the greatest time to
spend with someone you love. Great
poem! 2/6 God Bless 5/5
<3tay(^__^)

Vivid sweet descriptions, wonderful summer imagery, loving emtions, perfect flow, well penned, another great read 5/5

This is sweet and i can feel the love you have for this person
beautiful poem
the flow is great
another 5/5!!!
you have a great gift for poetry, i mean it, dont stop writing!!!

Ooo...fabulous job.
Summer is certainly one of the most looked forward to part of the year. =) Your imagery in this one was amazing & the emotions were strong. Wonderful job! Keep writing! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Wow, excellent write. I enjoyed the read. I am sure many of use can relate to this. Great work.

Peace, Joe

Aww.. this is cute.. the read was really nice.. the short and choppy lines work well.. you did a nice job of getting in so much in such a small space.. the simplicity of it works well too because of the simple sweetness of a summer romance.. great job .. :D

5/5 again. Your flow is perfect in these poems.