Theres such a simple vocabulary that apeals to everyone. It can take place in such a quick moment of time or a long one. This poem is so versatile, I loved it.

{5/5}

[PygmyPuff]

Well..I liked the message and meaning of the poem..but there wasn't really a flow through most of it.. I give it a 4 though since it had a good message..
Tyanna

The words used were simple vocabulary . Not big, but it worked well . The message in the poem is one that many need or want to hear now-a-days, and I like hwo you did a poem on it . The poem was appealing; I like you`r other works more tho .
..__MiNDYY

Good message in the poem written well enjoy it. Need to flow abit better.

BlAcK RoSe

4/5

Amazing poem!! really meaningful.Love your words. 5/5

~Chelsea

This was great =) and I read it just when I needed to be reminded of that. Thank you =) 5/5
Rhea

Oh wow.
This poem made me cry.
It is absolutely amazing, yo.
:]

The flow was alot better in this one. I agree with what you are saying. I think you did really really well on this one. Enjoyable read. 5/5

Beautiful poem, strong and deep with a lot of meaning. It shows the strength and compassion of the writer. Good job!

~jas~

I liked this one but I think that if you were to get rid of the I's and the You's and use a few more metaphores it would sound a little bit better. The message however was wonderful I loved it.

I liked it. The freeverse and part rhyme was great. Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it. I know exactly what you're talking about and I don't think enough people write slightly more positive poems like these.

Take Care - Sole.

Cliche.
But.
I liked the beginning paragraph; you could of had something there.
The rhyme was a bit cliche, too.

but. Yeah.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5