by BeautifulxMess Apr 19, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
best friends
My friend, Bree, is a short person with a big heart. |
This sounds like my BFF since pre-K, short and hyper. :) Now, to the poem. The flow was a bit rough in places, and a lot of the rhyming sounds really forced. You used a lot of detail about your friend in this poem with limited space however, so good job on that. 4/5. |