by Cindy
This is really cute and sweet. Must be a good friend. Keep writing. Take Care Cindy |
This isn't one of my favorites by you, the flow is very choppy in some parts. In other parts, it's hard to tell if you're trying to rhyme or not. It was just a little cliche, with the whole, "Girl loves the color pink" idea, but overall, it wasn't terrible. 4/5. |