Wow I really liked this poem its very different from the love poems that Im used to. The thought that someone is just thinking about how the other person feels about them is so common yet very rarely do people speak about it. Nice job on the poem. Thanx for sharing it with us all.

This is a really nice poem. It is always hard to break up with someone . It is worse when you always think about what could have been if you hadnt split. Well it is a great poem. 5/5

Kalee

Really good poem. I can really relate right now. 5/5

Your set out is so different still. well done. i loved this poem.

5/5 david

Wow.
Wonderful job. ;] The flow was good, the emotions were clear & strong, and the word usage was great.
I think that there are many people who feel this & I, too have felt this before. It sucks. =[

"Am I the only one,
Roaming through the past?
Has he simply gotten,
Over us so fast?"

^ My favorite stanza. Because I used to feel exactly the same way. =/
Fantastic job on the poem hun, keep writing! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

P.S. I always loved your profile. You're so confident - I'm jealous. ;]

A question that could kill you in the long run. a great poem full of insight into your mind and a quandary about what is in his mind.

your servant:
david

I love this poem too. i can really relate to it..i ask my self those questions a lot lately because of some things that have been going on with me and a guy. but wonderful poem! 5/5

To be honest I'm not sure... The whole "has he got over me too fast" situation seems pretty average and overused...I've heard it all before.
Yes, poetically it wasn't a bad poem, but subject wise it was just like many other ones I've read before.
Sorry, but I wasn't so keen on this one. Therefore, I cannot really give any suggestions or valid comments either way.
Keep writing.

To be honest I'm not sure... The whole "has he got over me too fast" situation seems pretty average and overused...I've heard it all before.
Yes, poetically it wasn't a bad poem, but subject wise it was just like many other ones I've read before.
Sorry, but I wasn't so keen on this one. Therefore, I cannot really give any suggestions or valid comments either way.
Keep writing.

This isnt a love poem that i usually read and its nice to have a change another wonderful poem

Wow this poem is truly great. I loved the flow and the story behind it. It was really good. The vocabulary was nice too. Goob Job once again

Great work...very well penned n it's sort of different but i liked it...very good choice of words..n i actually liked the way u'cve presented the matter in a unique n successful manner...Great job!

5/5!!
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