Very sad, but wonderfully written. Like I said before, great vocabulary. I really liked this stanza. "As i draw my last breathb I know theres nothing left" Keep up the good work. 5/5
-Ally

Again this is another very dept emotion.. i can only noticed,, i think u are really depress coz mostly of ur poems are about sad. well dear dont give up no matte how depts what u suffering rightnow.. i love the way how write ur feels dear keep it up..5/5