by freedom Apr 19, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I'm tired of waking up in the morning. |
by Sweet lig
Ohh how sad..great expressing ur feelings.. but dont be feel so down. all u have to do is to face the truth and u dont have to live with a lie. i believe ur poem is truly happen into urself coz i can really feel the emotion of this poet.. so iwill told u whatever u have depts feelings rightnow! believe me,, that is not forever ok.. great job5/5 |
by Tamsin
You'll never know how much this hits home. thankyou for sharing :) |
Wow...very powerful. It draws you in. lol It kept my attention from the very first line. Great work. Awesome vocab, keep up the good work. =) 5/5 |
by breezy
OMG, I know that feeling. You expressed the feelings perfectly. |