OMG, I know that feeling. You expressed the feelings perfectly.

Wow...very powerful. It draws you in. lol It kept my attention from the very first line. Great work. Awesome vocab, keep up the good work. =) 5/5
-Ally

You'll never know how much this hits home. thankyou for sharing :)

Ohh how sad..great expressing ur feelings.. but dont be feel so down. all u have to do is to face the truth and u dont have to live with a lie. i believe ur poem is truly happen into urself coz i can really feel the emotion of this poet.. so iwill told u whatever u have depts feelings rightnow! believe me,, that is not forever ok.. great job5/5