Pain

by ImNotPerfect20   Apr 19, 2007


All this pain wont go away
nothing helps, it does not stop.
I try, I try with all my heart.
But nothing works because it hurts.
I need help, I need it to change.

When will it happen when
will it get better. This heart
of mine is broken, shattered
into a million different pieces.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was simple, i liked it. and it flowed well, it was short and didnt rhyme but that made it better actually, it was a good read.
    well done
    xxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    I feel for you.
    good poem, it doesn't really have a flow. but i like it none the less

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    This poem was short, but it worked for it. I love the last stanza because it flowed really well and it held a lot of emotion.

    Alyson

  • 17 years ago

    by Taylor Lyn

    I like this a lot...very well written, the words flowed very well, and all around it was cute, short and sweet. 5/5 from me!

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Beautiful write...filled with emotions...though short...it was a lovely work!...n i can realate too.kp it up!
    xxPoojaxx

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