I liked this poem, short, simple. But powerful. I can relate to it in many ways.. Thanks for the comment on mine too, keep up the good work. =) 5/5
-Ally

Short but it gets the message across.
It is full of emotion.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

Wow
This is very very emotional, it truly touched me, sometimes that is exactly how i feel.
well done dear.

Another great piece! 5/5

Though short, I thought this conveyed a lot of emotion and depth behind the words.
It flowed well throughout, and the imagery was well done.
The ending was perfect, so very sad yet beautifully written.

You did an excellent job here. the poem was short, but it was still powerfully strong, with raw emtions. Keep up the good work, If you keep writting, I'll keep reading. 5/5

This is quite delightful to read. Although it is fine the way it is at the present moment, maybe applying a consistent line meter (doesn't need to rhym) and adding stanzas with vivid descriptions--in my humblest opinion--will augment this poem to a higher degree. (I just feel like you should expand it; it seems like a portion of a greater poem.) Nevertheless, it's a fine piece of work. Thank you for sharing.

Rhyme, I mean. My apologies.

This is a nice poem but seems a lil cliched. but apaty from that it's great. 4/5, not 1 of your best but still right up there!!!

I dont see much of a rhyme. But the message in the poem is wonderful. altogether it is wonderful. 4/5

Good job! on this one its short but straight to the point I like it! keep up the good work!

I loved this poem!
It's simplicity surprised me...it was short and to the point, but held such emotion!.
Well Done.

Elainex

This poem was again powerful and to the point and gives me the feeling that it either is to be continued, or it held such emotion for you that thast all there was to say!

Great work well done x

I love it, like I've said before what comes from the heart is always going to be great

I liked this one. Short, but still full of emotion, and depth. very good, and well written.

I think the first stanza was better written than the first one, it flowed better.
But all in all very well written. For such a short poem it expresses alot.
=)
Good job.

Great poem! Lots of emotion, and I love the last stanza. Even though it was short, it was not too short.

5/5 Keep it up :-)

This is a nice, quick read, but I found that it could be broken up a little better into stanzas, don't worry about making every line the same length. It would flow much better if you used lines instead of periods.

I'm relative to this poems. I think alot of people will be. That's always a good thing =]

Short but its good, it made me wish that it was a bit longer, you know, to tell us more, so maybe try a sequal, 5/5