I really like your poem ,very good job, will be reading more ,thanks for sharing ,,,,,Tracy

Hun,

No one knows better than me how this feels. A very emotional write. Filled with pain & hurt.

"Tired of not being good enough
exhausted from trying to be.
I am no angel nor close to it
I have only ever been, just me."

^ That stanza struck a cord with me. Fabulous job! Keep writing! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

This is a very sad poem but very good, loved the flow, its a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!!

"Tired of not being good enough
exhausted from trying to be.
I am no angel nor close to it
I have only ever been, just me."
this part has to be my favorite. This poem is truly amazing, I was stunned by the word choice, and blown away by the emtions so deep and strong. Truly a beautiflly written poem you have here, a perfectly flawless write.5/5

To be honest, I really loved this poem. It was truly smashin'! The flow was really good. The whole poem was very much emotive, and you made what you had to say very clear. I love the wording as well. Fantastic job, and keep it up.

Alesia

Wow i can really relate to this. Overall it a very good poem, full of feeling. The flow is a little shaky and there is 1 or 2 mistakes, like "lead" and "dead" do not rhyme well. I loved the 6th stanza though. Very heartfelt keep up the good work

5/5 excellent poem. wonderfull job.

i loved this stanza?

"That my pain and suffering was worth it
that losing my soul made you see,
everything I have done in this life
was in the hope you would appreciate me."

that was my fav. but the WHOLE poem was very impressive and well done. I absolutley loved it.

*adds you to fav*

I really like this a lot. Especially the ending. I like how the reference to 'burning' makes the image of 'Hell' seem so much more real.

"An empty echo of laughter,
covers the in dismissible sound of tears,"

^ 'in dismissible' should be 'indismissable'.

"Enough tears to fill the ocean,
enough pain to kill a heard.
enough silence to scorn a def man"

'Heard' should be 'herd'.
'Def' should be 'deaf'.

Overall, it was an enjoyable read.

Wow great, this is really nice. The consecutive rhymes are so well written it really caught my attention. You deserve 5/5 and you got it :)

Tc
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