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by herewithme Apr 19, 2007 category : Friendship, family / broken friendship
All those tears you cried all the hurt you hide everyone of your lies were they worth it? all the faces to blame all your thoughts put to shame all that you refused to claim were they worth it? all the spineless acts of hate all the stories you create all the ideas you must berate are they worth it? do you feel alone at dark? with no one there to ignite a spark nothing but a crude remark is it lonely in the dark? it is you who created this place full of nothing but empty space the ones you loved have been replaced so i ask you. was it worth it?
by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT
Beautiful written! ;-) 10/10 -Nessy
by K3LSI3
Great poem...i liked it. Kelsie
by xxSnow Angelxx
Beautiful poem..i liked it...kp writing.. ~Luv Pooja~
by sian
This was quite an interesting poem, the use of questioning rather than telling made me think