OMG your poem made me so depressed so beautiful I just wanted to cry, really I loved it 5/5 oh i hope you read one of mine.

Sad , btu it was so emotive aswell...gr8 poem write
keep up the good work:D
bree

This is well written but so sad

Sad but great poem.... 5/5

Wow... That brought a tear to my eye. I'm really sorry for your loss.
Amazing poem :)

This is amazing. And sad. Nice to see so much emotion, although I do wish it could have been about something else. But we don't alway choose what happens in our lives. Keep writing. Looking forward to reading more from you.

<3 bella