by MaSkEdSoUl
I like this. People using like being "cool" but they forget who they really are just to be in the in crowd. Keep writing. 5/5 |
by Lonesomeme
Wow....I am REALLY suprised you didnt rhyme tool with those ool words lol....great job! |
by Katryna
This is an awsome poem...It really ties in with high school |
by debbylyn
Reminds me of a phrase..."you laugh because I'm different....I laugh because you're all the same". Good job on the poem and the thoughtfulness that went into writing it. Always be yourself......All the best, Debbie |
by David
This so relates to me. i try to be someone else. so life is just that little bit easier. |
So many "ool" words lol` . I can totally relate to this (: Most of your "your"`s are supposed to be "you`re"`s . lol` sorry I`m really ... squeamish about those kind of things . The repitition of some words kind of lost meaning to me . xD But overall, it was pretty good (: |
by Maggie
Ithought this poem, was very well. |
Great job on the poem, yet it's very true ,that people are like puppets on a string, keep up the great work 5/5 |
Hey i really like this poem |
Right on man! |
by tinkerbell
Thnx for the comment:) really good poem its soo true to many ppl feel the pressure to be someone else to fit in 5/5 |
by Kitty Kat
I definitly like this poem!!I always be myself around people and if they don't like what the see or what they know about me then screw them!I have friends who love me for me and thats all I need even if I were to just have one best friend whose always there for me I'm good^-^ |
by Joy
I enjoyed this. |
by A Good Man
I really like this poem,its %100 true |