Wow i totally agree with this poem none the less i got beat and couldnt sleep when i was a child too, i can relate all too well to this poem, loved it 5/5 i hope you read one of mine.

Okay, it's very rarely that I read a poem and it actually brings me to tears. The emotion in this was heartbreaking. So true never judge a child from the clothes or actions they have, and only try to help nourish that child into a better situation.

Dixie

This is really hard to read. I have a little nephew who is being abused by his mother like this. My brother is fighting to gain custody. Yet the system keeps sending him back. We need to fight more for the children. Excellent job on this write.
Take Care Cindy

Wow this is deep, you actually made me think about how i see some kids comin to school not looking i guess as good as others, and i never thought that maybe their life wasnt so great! I love it, and it taught me something.

much love, *-*Asha*-*

...........and another great write