by Lor Apr 19, 2007
category :
Internet slang /
life, society
I`ve learned when you grow away from your friends you always find yourself hanging on to the one time you can remember you were all happy. |
by Lori Lee
That was awesome. my favorite part was in the begining about your friends and going back in your mind to where you were once happy. cuz I can relate to that a lot. but all in all the whole thing was really....well, it seemed like it came from somebody wise and someone who's experienced. anyway, keep up the good work. 5/5 |
I loved your poem, I believe teenagers dont understand the word love now a days its used like nothing and its meaning deceased im a teenager too but yeah nice poem 5/5 i hope you read one of mine. |