Nothing and a nobody

by fvalconbridge   Apr 19, 2007


Nothing but a broken heart
And sheâ??s a pathological liar
Wants nothing but a new start
Wants nothing but to ice the fire

Sheâ??s a nothing and a nobody
And she betrays all she knows
All her lies just flow freely
But then the cracks begin to show

Her friends start to discover
The bitter lies and slyness
And they canâ??t warn off her lover
The love is causing him blindness

And though she wants to fix her flaws
The adrenaline keeps her going
She breaks all the laws
And her black blood keeps flowing

Cuts and scars make her
Pain is her comfort
Drugs make her such a blur
But then she starts to lose her love

Blades and flames unite to her
Nothing but a broken heart
Her emotions get all stirred
And she wants nothing but a new start

And the only thing she had
Was her Stunning beauty of a lover
And when she drove him away
Leaving her broken down in parts
Sheâ??s left sad
And sheâ??s become a murderer
Of the heart

Now she really is a nobody
With no reason to live
And her soul drifts on freely
Now sheâ??s received everything she gives.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    Thank you for your comments on my poems... Your's are awesome as well.. wow... I love this one... 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by SiLeNtLy ScReAmInG

    I really like how you started the poem.

    "Nothing but a broken heart
    And she's a pathological liar"

    I thought your poem was very good, and sad too. I liked how you used the part about her wanting a new start more than once. It brought that point across stronger. Good job. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Greg Beam

    Wow this is very deep. the words flow very smoothly. and there is a lot of meaning in the poem. but theres a lot of places where when u submitted they added â?? to some of your words but if u go to edit poem u can erase them all.

  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    The end kinda of got confusing...well not exactly it's the flow that started being ruined. I guess that's what brings it down. Nice start a little long when it could've been a little shorter but well... Some of the words could've been a bit more pointed to capture a better image. Not mind-blowing but it was interesting.
    ~Faith-less

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    This was a good poem. It all went well together, but the flow was a bit off. I think it's because the lack of punctuation through-out the poem, eh.
    Other than that it was a great poem.
    Keep it up.

    <3 Teria

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