Really good... Good job 5/5

Good poem it's sad but it's still good. Keep up the great work. 5/5

This was a good poem. It all went well together, but the flow was a bit off. I think it's because the lack of punctuation through-out the poem, eh.
Other than that it was a great poem.
Keep it up.

<3 Teria

The end kinda of got confusing...well not exactly it's the flow that started being ruined. I guess that's what brings it down. Nice start a little long when it could've been a little shorter but well... Some of the words could've been a bit more pointed to capture a better image. Not mind-blowing but it was interesting.
~Faith-less

Wow this is very deep. the words flow very smoothly. and there is a lot of meaning in the poem. but theres a lot of places where when u submitted they added â?? to some of your words but if u go to edit poem u can erase them all.

I really like how you started the poem.

"Nothing but a broken heart
And she's a pathological liar"

I thought your poem was very good, and sad too. I liked how you used the part about her wanting a new start more than once. It brought that point across stronger. Good job. 5/5

Thank you for your comments on my poems... Your's are awesome as well.. wow... I love this one... 5/5