"Looking across the room seeking
For your hands to make me dreaming
Gained your love in this time maybe
But got trouble by loving you babe"

I like those lines the best. I think you did a good job in writing this poem. It is very good. Well done!!!!!!!!! 5/5

~Chelsea

The first stanza made me want to keep reading more. This poem i found to be really sweet and portrayed strong emotions of love throughout it. Well done beautiful poem.~mel

This is kind of confusing.
I read it more than once
And it still was.
Maybe you could straighten it up a bit?
But are you trying to say
Baby?
Or was it really
Babe?

Well done, very nice new poem. It was well written and organized and is very deep. I like how you repeated the last line in each stanza, well done.
~5/5

Wow, another great one, very greatly written.you are a great writer and your poems are all great.
keep it up. another 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

Hmm, some of your rhymes sound really forced. The flow was a bit off because of that.
Just to let you know.. 'maybe' and 'babe' doesn't rhyme at all. 'Maybe' and 'baby' would be the words that rhyme.

Another awsome poem
You're an amazing writer...you've got SO MUCH talent..im really impressed with alot of these!

<3 katie