by Lyndsay Kalyta Apr 19, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I left you standing here |
by Fallen Angel
Gd |
I like the foreshadowing from "Now, I don't feel beautiful anymore" to the last line..very well done, keep it up. |
Oh, this was so sad. It's really tough getting over someone who loved dearly. |
by ben thompson
Nice write. i enjoyed reading this one. |
Goed poem, gives a good expression of how you feel after a relationship is over ... |