This poem is sad...its true, but sad. I like how you use spurts or glimpses of memories and instances to show the type of regret. I dont know if you have ever left things unsaid between you and a loved one and then have them pass away.....but I have and it is not a happy feling. Great Job 5/5

That was a pretty thought provoking poem, and it was really deep. I thought it was ironic reading a poem about life from someone who's username is 'Contemplating Suicide'. It's an interesting poem, you shouldn't be thinking about death so much. Good poem though.

Lovely poem hun :D
and thank you for loving my poem so much and letting it win the contest. i tried my hardest :)

5/5 love.

I love this poem, your choice of waord is amazing. well pinned, great flow 5/5

Both my parents are doctors & I've spent my fair share of time in hopsital so this poem really made me thinhk.

I loved it because it showed different veiws people have, different thoughts when walking through a place full of sickness.

Again the flow was choppy but I loved this poem because of its content. It was a great idea and I really enjoyed reading it.

The structure of your writing could improve your poems greatly, the ideas are really good.

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Shouldn't this be
A scent of dead surrounds you
A scent of death surrounds you?
I don't think it has that much
Flow on it.
I understand your meaning.
Your rhymings are great.
But a poem needs to flow a bit more.
Check on some of your spellings.
I think you spelled
Realized wrong.
Lol.