Great Job....I really liked it. The optomistic aspect of it was really great too. I typically dont go for the rhyming schemes cuz they can become cheesy in a hurry but this poem was outstanding. 5/5 from me.

I get it.
And yet
I don't get it.
I have to say
This poem is kind of dry.
It caught my interest
But not as much as your
Other poems did.