by KeyxMashingxParody Apr 19, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
Out of every second of every day, |
by becca
Whoa! a beautifully written, really powerful poem. the repition throughout gives so much depth and meaning to it. a really enthralling and captivcating poem. keep it up! xXx |
Hey, |
by Vanessa
I really like the words you chose here. well pinned excellent flow. I really liked this work. good read 5/5 |
I though this was a wonderful poem.. It was awsome to read.. Keep up the good work! |
by Tricky Daze
The wording and flow of the poem was fluidy and perfect..but i just want to take ur attention to somehwre that breaks the rhyme a lil |