by isabel Apr 19, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
First, she had a life of bliss |
by HaileyHelen
This was very straight forward... that was the best part for me=] |
by Vanessa
Excellent. The emtions were clear, and consice, the flow was perfect, and it was well penned. I don't think there is anything you can do to im,prove this poem. 5/5 |