by skynerraw Apr 19, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
I thought they were there |
by Lonesomeme
Great job on this one as well, I know that its hard to be the 3rd wheel and sometimes even harder when the other persons are oblivious to what is happening...being shutout or shut down in a friendship or a group is sometimes humiliating and can be destructive to your self-esteem. I like how you have captured that in your poem. great job and keep your head up, find some other things to occupy your time, sports, clubs, parties, brothers and sisters to nag and torment...good luck Great job again, 5/5 |
by Kaila
I can deeply relate to this poem. I know exactly what your talking about I too have poems about this same subject. I liked it a lot! |