The rhyming kind of took away from the poem in this piece it just seemd a little forced

Again, your rhymes seemed a little forced, but it is better than the other one I read. I am glad that you finally understood your friend, and that you were able to be friends again. Keep up the good work, and please don't stop writting. 4/5

Aw i thought this was a really good poem, very sweet :)
thanks for your comment x

Very well written.. i loved it