Comments : Stolen Life

  • 17 years ago

    by Corinne

    Well written. The last line of the first verse is little too long. You might consider:

    Where are the answers she seeks?

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very sad. Imagery and word choices were great.

    Locked in her empty dark room
    Silence pressing against her soul
    Remembering a time long ago
    When she felt happy and whole.

    This stanza really ended this nicely.
    Take Care Cindy