Broken

by XcalibuR   Apr 19, 2007


I sit here knees drawn to my face thinking of the day you broke my heart
i am aching with pain and feelings..feelings that are pinned
I sit here knees drawn to my face thinking of the day you broke my heart
the pieces of my love are scattered in the wind

The day will come when i get over you
on that day i will stop loving you
I promise myself with what left of my heart
i promise myself ..

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  • 17 years ago

    by XcalibuR

    It was a spur of the moment thing if i had put more time into it it could have been a lot better lol ..thx 4 da advice

  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    This is a good poem, but it didnt end well, like the ending wasn't all that good, in my opinion. Maybe make it longer so it can flow alot better or think of a better ending.

    "I promise myself with what left of my heart"

    On this line put an 's' on the ending of the word "what". Fix it up a bit and it'll be perfect. 4/5

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