Aww.. that was so beautiful. You always seem to be able to combine beauty with such bittersweetness that really tugs on the heart strings of the reader.
Excellent rhythm as always. A joy to read
5/5
*Gem*

Oh the love thru out this poem, so magical and real. yet there was something more.

5/5 David

Your love shines through deeply in this piece....How painful to not have it returned. Great job on your poem.
Take Care Cindy

Get writing some more lovely poetry you!! lol
*Gem*

Its beautiful heartwarming and almost inspiring write.So true you have spoken about love.

Its beautiful.

Aww, great poem!!!!

**You're the one I think of among my daily routine
It seems like eternity when I don't hear from you
No matter how busy, I always find the time
Cause I'm in love and curious what your upto**

i think everyone can relate to that, that is amazing part and rly stuck out to me.

**Please don't lead me on if desires have begun to fade
Treasure times we had together, my heart will forever do
Just remove the silence and say something, yet remember
That no matter what, I will forever be madly in love with you. **

thats deep and sad at the sametime, I hope everything works out. excellent job

melissa

Superb...just so lovely. Very major issue has been touched here and whosoever has really loved someone..must have gone through this stage or atleast i feel that way. You are not the only one going through this...i think most of us do. Being a guyt i wont say that its the love which fades but i think priorities do change and thats again cause of the demand of time.

When time doesnt stay same..then how could humans behave the same way. This is the time when things should be tackled very carefully and thats where things go wrong mostly...i myself searching for the way it should be tackled... :o))

all the best and take care

great write indeed

Ohhh this was so beautiful.
The emotion shone through the words, the flow was flawless, the imagery created vivid pictures and the wording was a pleasure to read, as was the whole poem.
I loved the opening stanza and from there on it just kept getting better.
The ending was fantastic, it has great impact.
I hope things work out for you.

WHY DID YOU SAY SO? LOVE...I JUST CAN'T EXPAIN?

WHY IS THAT?

ANYWAY I LOVE IT

Sad, yet very beautiful. Definately going on my favs!!! 5/5

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