by aDORKable x3 Apr 19, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Story: a 16 year old girl finds out that she was switched at birth and when she finds her real mother, her "mom" ((who also switched her)) killed her real mother... This was written as if it was her, but in third person |
by Liz
I love the story your poem told. It's very sad, and it's something that can actually happen and i'm sure it has in someone's life. Very captivating piece. i loved it. Never stop writing, love! Take care! |
Awe Ciao Honey I loved it! I'm glad I never sent in mine for Terra, this one is way better...if this is for that, seems to me like it is haha. Anyways, another great write =) |
Ciao dear, this is wonderfully written!! I love it, all your poems have so much emotion and grace! I love the story behind it as well, it's wonderful!! Flow, word choice, everything, it's awesome!! 5/5 for sure!! |