Tears

My tears run deep
flowing down the ocean.
^Hmm, I'm a tad confused here, did you mean to say "flowing down like an ocean"? or did you literally mean, that they were falling over the ocean. I don't know, maybe it's just me? But that was kind of confusing to me..

They are never-ending
like a broken faucet.
^haha, see, unlike above, here I don't think you need the "like", I believe a metaphore would work nicely instead of a simile. "They are never-ending, a broken faucet." sounds better to me.

I drown everyday,
for the dam is huge.
^This is fine. Nicely done.

The drops never dry
even in the shiniest light.
^Er. I don't particually care for the wordage here "shiniest light" just doesn't sit well, at all, for me. Maybe try brightest or something? Also, I think you might want to add "not" before even, because it reinforces the "never".

They are so blue
leaving the sky shadowed.
^Not quite sure what you were trying to express here.

The water becomes solid
when the world is cold.
^Ahh I like how you wrote this! Nice!

The rain it brings
dissolves like acid.

Their currents are strong
washing me in sadness.

I am being showered
by blades of pain
splashing pools of blood.
^I don't like this. The randomness of the three lines coming out of nowhere is just weird for me. I would try combining two of the lines.

This river now runs still,
for the final cut is here.
^Okay ending.

**It was overall a nice poem. It could be 'bettered', and there were a few places I was confused, but you do have talent.

Woah i didnt like this at all. well written yes but not my kind of topic. sorta freaked me out. your talent is shown however

All of this is brilliant. What feeling, keep it up. 5/5

'Their currents are strong
washing me in sadness.'

Those lines are wonderful.

it's very emotive, very strongly written.

Jem

Creative I like it.