Aside from the technical errors, I find this piece rather remarkable--at least for me. I can thoroughly correlate with this work as, it seems, we have the same predicament at the moment. I, however, am glad to know that you're moving on [again]. Very nice. Hope you all the best and take care.

All of all ur pomes which are realy good is the one i mostly like comment bk

...Sounds unfinish,but that was really good =)~Maria